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Wednesday, 24 October 2012

danny's narrative


Walking to the Pt england beach, I was bombing off the rock. I did it 100 times! It was awesome. But then the water got a little bit deeper, which I had not realized. I had 1 more bomb so I could change but when I landed on the water then thats when I realized it was deep.


Well I was in the water nearly trending an humongous wave came at me and went all over me. My heart was pounding fast and I was not breathing at the moment. screaming my head out calling my brothers they did not hear me but they commented ‘’ wait’’ I tried swimming as fast as I could.


Finally I made it to the end of the sea. I rest and took a deep breath but from now I’m not doing that again!!   

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