danny's narrative

Walking to the Pt England Beach, I was bombing off the rock. I did it 100 times! It was awesome. But then the water got a little bit deeper, which I had not realized. I had 1 more bomb so I could change but when I landed on the water then thats when I realized it was deep.


While I was in the water nearly drowning, a humongous wave came at me and went all over me. My heart was pounding fast and I was not breathing at the moment. Screaming my head out, calling my brothers, they did not hear me. I tried swimming as fast as I could.


swimming towards the rock I was nearly there but it was hard,waves were everywhere but I never give up. Finally I made it to the edge of the sea. I had a rest and took a deep breath.
From now, I’m not doing that ever again!!.  

danny's narrative

Walking to the Pt england beach, I was bombing off the rock. I did it 100 times! It was awesome. But then the water got a little bit deeper, which I had not realized. I had 1 more bomb so I could change but when I landed on the water then thats when I realized it was deep.


Well I was in the water nearly trending an humongous wave came at me and went all over me. My heart was pounding fast and I was not breathing at the moment. screaming my head out calling my brothers they did not hear me but they commented ‘’ wait’’ I tried swimming as fast as I could.


Finally I made it to the end of the sea. I rest and took a deep breath but from now I’m not doing that again!!   

New mexico

Along time ago in New Mexico there was a flood, a lot of kids were playing in a flood causing trouble amongst houses and splashing water onto clothes.
There was a kid whose name was Jamain. He climbed up to the very top because his friend dared him to do it. so he jumped off the roof because he wanted to be the man.
He landed on his stomach he tried to get up but he couldn't.  Water was covering his face. His upper body was pounding with pain and couldn't breath that much. A random friend reached out to his hand and took him to his brother Steven Fox

Steven Fox took him to the hospital because he had been injured. When he opened his eye his mum was so enthusiastic because Jamain was still alive that was good thing.
When they got back  stevens back side was red as superman's cape. After that the flood dried up everyone took the stuff down and put them back where they were. All the kids were bored without a  water anywhere to be seen.

Jamain came back home he was pleased to see his friends and family. his friends
ran and up to jamain and hugged him to heaven.