Writing Test 05/11/2015

“ Beep beep!!” As we arrive at Dunkirk Memorial field to have our touch tournament, we 

quickly took our gear down to the field .Struggling to Set up the gazebo my friends Taniela and Paula ran down to help me lift the edges I felt really weak. We had to get everything sorted because our first game was in 5 minutes .

Once we were done helping Miss Va’afusuaga we immediately jogged to our field. I gazed at the team we were challenging “ wow!”. The game is about to start and Our coach Tyson puts us into position. Waiting for the ref to blow the whistle suddenly I got all nervous so I bit my lip.

It was our ball and we were making a lot of meters on the winger side. “ Touch 3 “ as the ref calls, we started passing the ball around to make the other team tired. “ Touch 4 “ I quickly picked up the ball and ran straight to the winger . Right in that moment in the corner of my eye I saw TeMauri right beside me so I drawed and passed to him then he passed it to Asena then she went for a crazy dive to score the first try !.

“ I’ll mark him “ Our team was on defence. They were really fast and tall but that didn’t really matter . 2 more minutes left and we were on there five meter line It’s was really frustrating. The game had ended and the score was 3 - 0 , we finally had our first win .

I knew this tournament was gonna be a challenge so I trained hard nervously waiting for our next game. “ Your game is in 10 minutes “ Shouted Tyson. “ Dammmn!!”

Leka The Strange voice

On one bad day the sky was white and clouds were in a pile James just finished feeding the hens. Walking outside singing with enthusiasm getting ready to stretch James tripped over a hook’’ Oh no ‘’ James face planted on the grass. James stood up with anger he punched his door and sat on the step ‘’ that was so embarrassing lucky no one saw’’ James said.

Getting change to water hose the gardens James zipped up his suit and went outside. All a sudden James heard a whisper an strange voice saying, ‘’come here’’ It was coming from the shed. James ran to the shed all the hens were gone ‘’NO WAY’’ James jumped over the fence and went out looking for them. James sat down on the tree ‘’ my hens are gone’’ where are they?.

James persvired and stood up with fare ‘’Wow’’ something zoomed past James something black. It went to the back of the shed James ran to the back nothing was there only a lemon tree. ‘’ OH MAN’’ James heard a whisper again but this time he did not know what the whisper said.

He looked in his garage ‘’ THERE YOU ARE’’ James found the hens. But that was it, James wanted to know who’s whisper it was. He ran into the shed and there he was.... He was in the corner staring at James with a depressed face ‘’ What your name?’’  ‘’billy’’........ Billy then vanished. James ran back to the shed all of the hens were gone as well.